In the
future, I want to have a big house and wide yard around like
the house where I spent my childhood. I like to do some exercises or swimming. A large swimming pool and green garden where I
can plant some tree and flowers, a dining room completely with the big dining
table where I can invite friends and my big family, a barbeque corner, and a small tree house on the backyard seems exciting !
My big house
will be near the beach. The sound of sea gulls, the blowing wind, the white
sand, and so many colorful fish down
there… Beach environment is always
relaxing for me.
for the sentence "...plant some tree and flowers, a dining room..." you should add word "s" after "tree" because it is plural I think. Overall is good but, please be aware again about the problem the amount of spacing between words.
BalasHapusYeah true! 'tree' is plural and countable :D
Hapus