It was the day that Mr Bean
should go to the dentist. The alarm clock was rang at 8 o’clock. But Mr Bean
turned it off. He got up at 8.50 AM. He prepared to go to the dentist. He went
out the house without changing his cloth or brushing his teeth. He changed his
cloth and brushed his teeth in the car, on the way to the dentist! Yes ! he
did all those such things while driving !
That was so danger attraction ! Arrived dentist’s place, he did
something weird, again ! He parked his car carelessly. When the police came to
him, he just smile, like nothing happened !...
for the sentence ". . .without changing his cloth or brushing his teeth. . ." the word "cloth" in Indonesia means "kain" not kind of apparel, you should change what name of cloth it is, like pajamas or suit . . .
BalasHapushe he thanks... I've done the same mistake with you, Mas Adam ; cloth...
Hapus"The alarm clock was rang at 8 o’clock. But Mr Bean turned it off"
BalasHapusmake compound sentence, so change the "." with ","
"The alarm clock was rang at 8 o’clock, but Mr Bean turned it off"
Thanks, Mas Fikri.. great advise.. :)
Hapus"was rang" this sentence use past verb. if this is the passive sentence, it is correct, but it is the simple past tense, just write= the clock rang... or the clock had rang...
BalasHapus